On this review, I give the 5 secrets to write an amazing headline and make your candidate customer to not think again to buy your products.
First, a headline make your candidate costumer to write all of the sales letter , so you have to make sure your headline be an attractive one.
Second, make a problem on the headline make your candidate costumer attract with it.
Third, negative things on the right situation can be more effective to attract people because it felt so emotional.
Fourth, make a sentence that will make your candidate costumer remember it everytime.
Fifth, use verb! Not noun and adjective but verb.
I will give you an example of sales letter..
Angelia BELLMET
Pessut Raya Street, Bekasi 17131
gbellmet@yahoo.com-085695864216
Pessut Raya Street, Bekasi 17131
gbellmet@yahoo.com-085695864216
February 28th, 2011
Dear Mrs. Mc Cunty
As you can see, I've got a stable background exclusively in the service industry, successfully taking care of customer needs by making them a priority.
The company I am now working for (a great company, by the way) is having problems because of fallout from the recent economic recession.
And although I am well-qualified to accept a position with another similar firm, to me... I view this as a "hint"... it's time to make a change. That's why I'm interested in the opportunity to work second shift at 02:30 PM.
My employer is aware of my job search. And in light of their situation, they're very supportive of me.
So it'll be a cinch for you to get great references on me, from them... and from anyone else you want to call.
Working second shift gives me more time to spend with my 3 year-old daughter, and the truth is -- nothing makes me happier.
And I don't need to tell you, when someone is happy outside their job, their performance in their job is "that much" better.
I'm looking forward to making Angelia BELLMET an even stronger customer service company than it is today!
Thanks for your time and thanks for reading this letter.
Sincerely,
Ivo Angelia
